The Sand Hill Review          http://www.sandhillreview.org       2002

 

adjectives anonymous

 

I go to meetings

tell my story with lurid culpable details

admit I am powerless again and again

come home sober and resolved

to let the concrete speak for itself

 

but in short order pick up a pen

and as doodling becomes poetry

I begin to crave the liquor

of bloated and fuzzy adjectives

to place in front of every noun

 

storm through the house

for the Thesaurus hidden in the towels

the synonym dictionary stashed under the sofa

the pocket version in the light fixture

or the OED disguised as a Bible

 

I’ve even resorted to a rhyming dictionary

in a paper bag I’m ashamed to say

I’m beginning to think it’s hopeless

this distasteful debauched life of words

endless shades of meaning useful to no one

 

even the sessions on adverbs

seem wastefully superfluous

how many have I hurt by this fondling of modifiers

how many children bear lifelong scars

does it really matter

 

I make amends with palpable intentions

hope for spiritual awakening

the concise brevity of delete and backspace

then let go serenely accepting

the varied and subtle things I cannot change

 

 

Richard Lawson