The Sand Hill Review               http://www.sandhillreview.org              2009

 

 

 

 

 Merwin

 

I will tell you what he told us

clustering around him in the foyer

of the old convent Posada de las Monjas

the smell of good coffee and the smoky fire

and the sweet round of Epiphany bread

circling the room  all poetry comes from

listening to what you don’t know

you’re listening to he said stretching out

slim legs in jeans cowboy boots

with curved tops their pattern finely traced

he took questions  who is the dreamer

how does that process work someone asked

that’s what you spend your whole life

finding out he would deny this but by then

we could have been any age

sitting on the floor roughly an oval

absorbing him as later

the children of the town would the Reyes

Magos with their spices and bronzefoil coins

tell us your best secrets

poetry is about relation what cannot be said

read us a poem and tell us why you love it

from the chambray shirt pocket a sheet of paper

 to carry when you travel write some out he suggested

do you know Hardy‘s Proud Songsters

—The thrushes sing as the sun is going,

    And the finches whistle in ones and pairs

    ...As if all time were theirs...

    ...a year ago or less than twain

   No finches were...But only

   particles of grain

   And wind, and air, and rain—   

this is an image of everything he said

the silver hair the still immensely clear

blue eyes  you sing and you won’t

be there after awhile

do I have to tell you why I love that poem

 

all you have is the sound of the bird

 

 

Notes

 

l. 1: This line is a slight variant of the first line of W.S. Merwin’s poem, “Berryman,” i.e. “I will tell you what he told me.” 

 

l. 5:  Traditionally the special bread for the Dia de los Reyes Magos, or Epiphany (Jan. 6), la rosca,  is baked with a figurine of the baby Jesus inside. One is told “come con cuidado,”—eat it carefully. By custom, the person whose slice contains el munequito is obliged to host a feast of tamales on Feb. 2, the official close of the Nativity season. 

 

l. 18:  In San Miguel del Allende, setting of this poem, and widely through Mexico, a parade winds through the streets on Epiphany night, featuring three crowned and robed Wise Men, riding on burros, tossing candies and small gifts to the crowd.

 

1. 25 ff:  The excerpts from Thomas Hardy’s poem, “Proud Songsters,” are taken from the Penguin edition, edited by Robert Mezey.

 

Elizabeth Chapman